make ur day huh...
well i think this sucks........................... ......................... lol got ya!!! zike - this is not bad at all bro - like u said u were tired when u made this.. i really feel that this can be a good song doh.... why not change some stuff around and make it better when ur' feelin up to it.. like for exp.. for me this was going a lil to fast... why not slow it down a bit.. and kinda turn it into a jazzy kinda song... u can leave everything the same.. just kinda slow it down a bit u know... have .. nice song bro... now go and get some rest school boy....
p.s. - stay in school.. lol, peace!!!!